EDITING PROCESS MANUSCRIPT "MIX FOOD CATERING"
EDITING PROSES MANUSCRIPT
"MIX FOOD CATERING"
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The rules :
* If there is a wrong sentence, it will be colored yellow.
* If there are sentences that are corrected, they are given an orange color.
* There is an explanation of what is wrong with the sentence.
• Below is the link to the manuscript file that has not been edited :
• Below are some sentences or texts that found errors, accompanied by corrections, and also explanations.
1. Text in the copyright section
* Sentence :
Copyright is an exclusive right for an author or right recipient to publish or reproduce his work or give permission for it without reducing copyright in accordance with statutory rights. Any person who without the right and / or without the author's permission or the copyright holder violatesthe economic rights of the Author as referred to in Article 9 paragraph (1) letter a, letter b, letter e, and / or letter g for Commercial Use, shall be punished with a maximum imprisonment of 4 (four) years and / or a maximum fine of Rp1,000,000,000.00 (one billion rupiah).
* Repair :
Copyright is an exclusive right for an author or right recipient to publish or reproduce. His work or give permission for it without reducing copyright in accordance with statutory rights. Any person who without the right and/or without the author's permission, or the copyright holder violates the economic rights of the author as referred to in Article 9 paragraph (1), letter a, letter b, letter e, and/or letter g for commercial. Use punishable by is up to four (four) years in prison and/or a fine maximum fine of Rp1,000,000,000.00 (one billion rupiah).
* Explain :
The error is found in the absence of comma and period punctuation.
Errors are found in grammar so that they have different meanings.
The error contains spaces in the slash marks.
2. Text in the preface section
* Sentences :
Praise be to our gratitude to Allah SWT because it is with His grace and grace that the "MIXFOOD CATERING" Business Proposal which operates in catering services can be arranged. This proposal is prepared to be used as a reference for making books as well as being used as guidelines and directions for the managers of business activities to be carried out. But as an ordinary human being who is not free from all mistakes and shortcomings, he is far from perfect. So I realized that this catering proposal still had shortcomings and mistakes both in sentence structurechoice of words or in the presentation of the material. Given the limited ability and reasoning power of the compilers
* Repair :
Praise be to Allah SWT for our gratitude, because it is with His grace and grace. That the "MIXFOOD CATERING" business proposal, which operates in catering, services can be arranged. This proposal is prepared to be used as a reference for making books as well as being used as guidelines and directions for the managers of business activities to be carried out. However, as a normal human being who makes mistakes, and shortcomings, he is far from perfect. So I realized that this catering proposal still had shortcomings and mistakes, both in sentence structure and choice of words. Or in the presentation of the material. Given the limited ability and reasoning power of the compilers.
* Explain :
The error is found in the absence of comma and period punctuation.
Errors are found in grammar so that they have different meanings.
The error contains spaces in the slash marks.
3. Text in the closing section
* Sentences :
That's a glimpse of our company profile and hopefully by submitting this proposal we can negotiate and work together to achieve our goals.
* Repair :
That's a glimpse of our company profile, and hopefully by submitting this proposal we can negotiate and work together to achieve our goals.
* Explain :
The error is in the absence of comma punctuation.
4. Text in the last page
* Sentences :
As a business venture, catering must have a vision and mission as a reference for carrying out its functions and duties so that its objectives are achieved. A vision is a carefully formulated ideal of the company, which determines the direction or future state of the business. Mission is the embodiment of the company's vision. Both are the main references for all changes that occur in a company.
* Repair :
As a business venture, catering must have a vision and mission as a reference for carrying out its functions and duties so that its objectives are achieved. A vision is a carefully formulated ideal of the company that determines the direction or future state of the business. Mission is the embodiment of the company's vision. Both are the main references for all changes that occur in a company.
* Explain :
Errors are found in comma punctuation and grammatical errors.
You can see more clearly by clicking on the repair file below :
Edited by :
- Deta Sekar Tanandar
- Putri Nurhaliza
- Viqa Putri Zefanya